Citation Change Log
Page: Writing Under Surveillance
Primary validation sheet: citations.html
Updated: 2026-03-01
Round 2 escalation outcome
Round 2 identified six blockers that required author action. Those author-side edits are now applied and reflected on site.
1) Watkins epigraph
Resolved. Unlocatable quote removed. Epigraph replaced with a verifiable Audrey Watters quote.
2) Watkins "Our Obsession"
Resolved. Orphaned Works Cited entry removed.
3) Watkins "Beyond Ineffective"
Resolved. Orphaned Works Cited entry removed.
4) "Cheeky" claim wording
Resolved. Language now describes prompt-based generation tweak, not random post-hoc insertion.
5) Engelbrecht 10% / 81%
Resolved for framing. Source is now described as a detector comparison video, matching source type.
6) USD Law Library neurodivergent attribution
Resolved. Unsupported USD attribution removed. Neurodiverse false-positive claim now tied to Hirsch.
Current status
No Round 2 author-action blockers remain open. For line-level details and per-source notes, use citations.html.
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